25. Nasty girl
Original (1997)
I woke up as the day went by,
I thought about her and I began to cry.
I miss her, I can’t believe it, all the day and all the night.
I fell in love with her, I felt so high.
The days went by, the nights were long,
She said to me: “You’re so strong.”
I loved her, she denied me.
She laughed. And whispered to her friend,
“He’s the one!” and laughed again.
Bad dreams when I slept,
All the pain inside of me I kept.
I thought about to die
And thought about my mother’s cry.
I was down, so unhappy,
But it’s over now, for the night I’m ready.
Tears ran out of my eyes,
When I thought ‘bout her, my heart began to cry.
Evil thoughts and mad desires,
Inside of me burns the hell’s fire.
KI-Rework (2025)
I woke up as the day went by,
Thought of her and began to cry.
I miss her deeply, all day, all night,
I fell for her - she took me high.
The days were fleeting, nights so long,
She said, “You’re brave, you’re so strong.”
I loved her true, she turned away,
And whispered cruelly, “He’s my prey.”
Bad dreams haunted my weary sleep,
A pain too deep for words to keep.
I thought of death, my mother’s tears,
Of broken hopes and shadowed years.
I was down, so lost, so low,
But time passed on, now I let go.
Tears still fall when I recall,
The girl who made my heart enthrall.
Evil thoughts and darkened fires,
Fed by loss and cursed desires.
Beim Übertragen dieses englischsprachigen Gedichtes kam ich auf die Idee, es von ChatGPT in "besseres" Englisch umschreiben zu lassen.
Dies ist das Ergebnis meines Experiments, das ich an dieser Stelle mit euch teilen möchte, ohne eine moralische Wertung darüber abzugeben.
Ich probiere Dinge gern aus, bevor ich entscheide, ob sie zu meiner Arbeitsweise passen. Meine Texte entstehen weiterhin ohne KI-Unterstützung.
Daril Steelbone
29.08.2026
